MonkeyV's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[HW - The Introvert]

Oh man

I could just walk down the street at night, alone, in the rain, with a hoodie on.
Nice job.

haywirehaywire responds:

thanks, but wheres the crit for the 8?

[Blank Stare (RD2010)- Japillow]

Good

I like it, and I see where you were going with the classical.
Only problem... it's not very "robot-y" if you catch my drift. It's just too smooth.
It's a good song, but I think you should add a tad more synth-sound and jerkiness to it.

Japillow responds:

Ya, I'm starting to think I shouldn't of entered this for Robot Day at all...my song OUTLAW is a lot more robotic if you care to listen to it. Thank you for the review!

[Rig - Sentience Loop]

Awesome

Kinda repetitive until the end, but still pretty cool.

It sounds like if you were to pour the Amazon Rain Forest into a garbage disposal.

Rig responds:

That would kinda hurt.

[RD2010 Robot Death Machine]

Very nice

Hilarious lyrics, nice idea, good tunes.
But like the others, I gotta mark this way down because of the sound quality. You can barely hear the individual sounds or lyrics.
Fun fact: This song has some very similar ideas to the song I'm planning to submit. Let's see how we do =)

Pure-Metal-UTA responds:

I have constantly been EQing this to try and get everything to sound good. So at this point, I have no idea how I would go about fixing everything to sound right.
Although When I listen to this with headphones, it sounds alot better.
But if you should listen to this with headphones, and it still doesn't sound good. Do you have any pointers in which I could use to fix this song and bring it to it's full potential?
Thanks!

[Hardcore LOOP!!]

Nice

My suggestion to you is to have a slower, quieter part in the middle. Sort of like a breakdown or a transition. It would make the song longer and more interesting.
Good job =)

DjDema responds:

Thanks man. It was just something I did out of boredom haha. Just a face-paced loop :P

[Nature Is The Law (WIP)]

Very neat :)

Reminds me of some Kingbastard songs.

I like the lyrics and the singing style (the way your tone shifts down in odd places).
Not much else I can say, because it's a pretty simple song overall. I like it. Maybe you could add some more lyrics, possibly modify the second and third versus from the first one.

StickyRemnant responds:

Cheers. Not heard of Kingbastard before. Will have to check him/them out.

About the lyrics, yea, I should have said that the lyrics aren't finished. Verse 2 and 3 will have their own lyrics by the time I come to finishing the recording

[93 Years and a Guitar]

Sounds good

What I think you should think about doing, is to extend the song and set this somewhere in the middle as the guitar solo. Like an epic or something like that.

PlayTheGame responds:

thanks man

[Jaded]

pretty good

Simple enough, but not too simple. Feels like a walk down the road at nighttime. I might try to play some guitar to this for you.

TorontoRecording responds:

Thanks for the review. Let me know if you can come up with anything, it would be cool to collaborate!

[BoT Remix]

Pretty cool

I liked it. Make some more, your audio section is kinda baron right now.

JonZero responds:

Yeah... I've made a lot of songs. I usually just put 'em everywhere. Mostly myspace but lol i'll get more up on NG :D

[The Eternally Tainted]

Awesome!

What synth instrument was that in the background?

Kor-Rune responds:

it's just called a Pad. thanks for the review!